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Josephine 9th Feb 2012, 5:32 PM edit delete reply
I can't believe this is your first webcomic. Your layout is so keen and is such great story-telling that I suspect you've played around offline? Your speech bubbles are seldom confusing and really are spaced well--not too much text in one, and show pause really well. The bleed of the water color is also quite nice. I'm tempted to say 'purposely sloppy' but that implies that it doesn't look good. It gives it a certain je-ne-sais-quoi...
Josephine 9th Feb 2012, 5:58 PM edit delete reply
I feel a little silly--you probably just listened when they did that bit of explaining in art school. Thanks for sharing a great story!
korimichele 10th Feb 2012, 7:44 PM edit delete reply
No need to feel silly! This comic is just the fruit of a lot of good feedback! My skill is in watercolor, and I know what you mean by "sloppy"- I like to think of it as "loose!" As for the comic bubbles, my husband is also my graphics editor- he's a professional designer and huge comics buff. He's helped me a lot with the bubbles. I've worked on private comics projects before, but this is the first that I'm really writing all on my own! Thanks so much for all they lovely compliments. I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job!!